משתמש:Abhidevananda/טיוטה: הבדלים בין גרסאות בדף

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-Oh Abiding Friend, take me with.
+.Oh Abiding Friend, take me with
-Toward yon streaming fountain of effulgence,
+,Toward yon streaming fountain of effulgence
-Oh Abiding Friend, take me with.
+.Oh Abiding Friend, take me with
-No more can be borne unenlightenment's affliction;
+;No more can be borne unenlightenment's affliction
-Oh Abiding Friend, take me with.
+.Oh Abiding Friend, take me with
-Shattering my dense slumber with one song after another,
+,Shattering my dense slumber with one song after another
-Oh Abiding Friend, take me with
+.Oh Abiding Friend, take me with
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